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I thought your Artist Comments were supposed to be a metaphor for the piece as a whole, but I decided to flip my laptop upside down anyway -- just for fun -- and I was so surprised by what I saw!
This is certainly something I don't see every day. Major points for creativity, and for being able to pull this off so well! It's amazing how you've created such a cheerful image (complete with soft, swirling lines) that can change so drastically just by turning the piece upside down.
On a more technical note, I'm quite fond of the two-toned look you have here. It compliments the drawing very well. Additionally, this is quite a unique canvas shape, and you made a beautiful choice in hue. The white-and-copper effect makes this piece seem even more surreal; like a mural. Or an ancient scroll. Or a shield. Or a Greek vase. Love it. What sort of medium is this, anyway? Is it white chalk on paper? What is your canvas made of?
If I could adjust anything about this piece, it wouldn't have to do with the artwork at all -- but the way you've uploaded this deviation. Because the stark contrast between the white and bronze creates such a wonderful effect, the rest of the white background tends to be distracting. If possible, it'd be wonderful if you opened this piece in Photoshop (or a similar program) and got rid of the white background. Upload the deviation again as a .GIF or .PNG file keeping the background transparent.
All in all, this is a fantastically creative and wonderful deviation. I'm so glad it caught my eye in #Thumbsshare, as it was quite a treat to stumble upon. Keep up the wonderful work!
And thank you so much for sharing.
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